Going to the Country -revised
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Thanks, Addy. That's maybe a good idea about the last verse.As for the 3rd verse, it should be
Fair-weather features will be tacked to the borders.

But looking afresh at this verse I think it's gonna go or be torn apart. It reads to me now like a warning of encroaching multiculturalism and that's not the intent. It was meant to be about election posters appearing all over the place.
Before criticising a person, try walking a mile in their shoes. Then when you do criticise them, you're a mile away.....and you have their shoes.
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Going to the Country -revised - by penguin - 08-07-2012, 05:24 PM
RE: Going to the Country - by billy - 08-09-2012, 11:45 AM
RE: Going to the Country - by billy - 08-10-2012, 06:40 AM
RE: Going to the Country - by penguin - 08-10-2012, 11:15 PM
RE: Going to the Country - by billy - 08-11-2012, 08:38 AM
RE: Going to the Country - by addy - 08-11-2012, 08:51 AM
RE: Going to the Country - by penguin - 08-12-2012, 08:40 PM
RE: Going to the Country -revised - by billy - 08-13-2012, 12:27 PM
RE: Going to the Country -revised - by addy - 08-13-2012, 12:30 PM
RE: Going to the Country -revised - by Philatone - 08-13-2012, 02:40 PM
RE: Going to the Country -revised - by penguin - 08-13-2012, 06:27 PM
RE: Going to the Country -revised - by Philatone - 08-13-2012, 11:35 PM
RE: Going to the Country -revised - by tectak - 08-17-2012, 09:13 PM
RE: Going to the Country -revised - by penguin - 08-17-2012, 10:52 PM



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