08-12-2012, 05:21 AM
It's nice bait for the hook 
Let's see -- there are archaisms, there's a comma in the first line that doesn't belong and doesn't work as a caesura, there's inverted syntax...
It's an eclectic blend of all those things that one might consider misplaced in contemporary poetry.
Love the must wordplay.
Let's see -- there are archaisms, there's a comma in the first line that doesn't belong and doesn't work as a caesura, there's inverted syntax...
It's an eclectic blend of all those things that one might consider misplaced in contemporary poetry.
Love the must wordplay.
It could be worse