Going to the Country -revised

Going to the Country -revised

billy Offline

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08-11-2012, 08:38 AM

i see rants in anything Big Grin

. maybe rant wasn't the right word to use.
and the 10th line certainly did that Smile

i think it starts off all country the idiosyncrasy of it and at the end it feels a bit preachy, maybe that was word i should have used. but it could just be my eyes that see it that way. thanks for not beating me Smile

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Going to the Country -revised - by penguin - 08-07-2012, 05:24 PM

RE: Going to the Country - by billy - 08-09-2012, 11:45 AM

RE: Going to the Country - by billy - 08-10-2012, 06:40 AM

RE: Going to the Country - by penguin - 08-10-2012, 11:15 PM

RE: Going to the Country - by billy - 08-11-2012, 08:38 AM

RE: Going to the Country - by addy - 08-11-2012, 08:51 AM

RE: Going to the Country - by penguin - 08-12-2012, 08:40 PM

RE: Going to the Country -revised - by billy - 08-13-2012, 12:27 PM

RE: Going to the Country -revised - by addy - 08-13-2012, 12:30 PM

RE: Going to the Country -revised - by Philatone - 08-13-2012, 02:40 PM

RE: Going to the Country -revised - by penguin - 08-13-2012, 06:27 PM

RE: Going to the Country -revised - by Philatone - 08-13-2012, 11:35 PM

RE: Going to the Country -revised - by tectak - 08-17-2012, 09:13 PM

RE: Going to the Country -revised - by penguin - 08-17-2012, 10:52 PM

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