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Monsoon

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The Dog's Bollocks.

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08-08-2012, 08:33 PM

i really like the first line, though unfortunately found it more riveting than your close. a nice piece though Smile

PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?

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Monsoon - by billy - 08-08-2012, 11:42 AM

RE: Monsoon - by addy - 08-08-2012, 08:33 PM

RE: Monsoon - by billy - 08-09-2012, 11:27 AM

RE: Monsoon - by poetsorrow - 09-21-2012, 02:03 AM

RE: Monsoon - by billy - 09-21-2012, 11:57 AM

RE: Monsoon - by Aish - 09-22-2012, 02:12 AM

RE: Monsoon - by billy - 09-24-2012, 04:27 PM

RE: Monsoon - by TwistedAngel - 10-13-2012, 06:59 PM

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