08-07-2012, 10:47 PM
I think this line
this is how snow feels to a daffodil
is better than what you have now.
And I don't really understand (you would never write this down).
There was a certain symmetry to the original and it's a shame that's gone but then I'm rather obsessive. I love "hours wealthier".
this is how snow feels to a daffodil
is better than what you have now.
And I don't really understand (you would never write this down).
There was a certain symmetry to the original and it's a shame that's gone but then I'm rather obsessive. I love "hours wealthier".
Before criticising a person, try walking a mile in their shoes. Then when you do criticise them, you're a mile away.....and you have their shoes.