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08-07-2012, 09:45 PM
(08-07-2012, 04:32 PM)addy Wrote: Late to the party Thanks very much!
“Give me silence, water, hope
Give me struggle, iron, volcanoes.” ― Pablo Neruda |
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RE: narcissus - by Leanne - 08-05-2012, 06:52 AM
RE: narcissus - by Ruth - 08-05-2012, 07:07 AM
RE: narcissus - by Leanne - 08-05-2012, 07:10 AM
RE: narcissus - by Ruth - 08-05-2012, 07:12 AM
RE: narcissus - by billy - 08-05-2012, 10:31 AM
RE: narcissus - by Leanne - 08-05-2012, 10:34 AM
RE: narcissus - by addy - 08-07-2012, 04:32 PM
RE: narcissus - by Ruth - 08-07-2012, 09:45 PM
RE: narcissus - by penguin - 08-07-2012, 10:47 PM
RE: narcissus - by billy - 08-08-2012, 11:02 AM
RE: narcissus - by tectak - 08-09-2012, 01:44 AM
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, but I'd just like to say that this is a great edit and a great poem. Strong imagery, no dead weight. Everything works and at the points where it shines its superb.