narcissus

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08-07-2012, 04:32 PM

Late to the party Tongue

, but I'd just like to say that this is a great edit and a great poem. Strong imagery, no dead weight. Everything works and at the points where it shines its superb.

PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?

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narcissus - by Ruth - 08-05-2012, 06:20 AM

RE: narcissus - by Leanne - 08-05-2012, 06:52 AM

RE: narcissus - by Ruth - 08-05-2012, 07:07 AM

RE: narcissus - by Leanne - 08-05-2012, 07:10 AM

RE: narcissus - by Ruth - 08-05-2012, 07:12 AM

RE: narcissus - by billy - 08-05-2012, 10:31 AM

RE: narcissus - by Leanne - 08-05-2012, 10:34 AM

RE: narcissus - by addy - 08-07-2012, 04:32 PM

RE: narcissus - by Ruth - 08-07-2012, 09:45 PM

RE: narcissus - by penguin - 08-07-2012, 10:47 PM

RE: narcissus - by billy - 08-08-2012, 11:02 AM

RE: narcissus - by tectak - 08-09-2012, 01:44 AM

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