Friable

[tectak]

Two blistered sausages spilling
their stuffing over the sofa. I took too much from the duality of meaning in the title before realizing that friable and fryable were not fungible. I am still little unsure of the intent. Is that your intent?
The yellow of an egg has run;...but as a straight observation this line takes me out of the picture. I am no longer required to be personally involved. Would "his" or "her" or "my" or even "the" instead of the spacially indefinite "an" work better?
the sun is exiting the sky. Again, and this is my take, due principally to the friable uncertainty, am I to go for exiting or exciting. If the former then "leaving" is more comfortable...if the latter then it is dawn. Breakfast time.
Burnt and brittle bacon, broken
by children full of beans.Yes to this. It is quotable in isolation......but it IS in isolation. If there is some profundity in this non-sentence (unless an answer to what is that on your plate) it does escape me. Who cares. It is cute like a teddy- bear)
What to make of this? If I say it passes me by I feel I am missing out. If I say it stirs me I cannot tell you why. So I,ll say nowt.
Best,
tectak



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Two blistered sausages spilling
their stuffing over the sofa.
The yellow of an egg has run;
the sun has exited the sky.
Burnt bacon curled dark anger,
broken by children full of beans