08-07-2012, 02:26 PM
If languid is your intention, then that's good. Sex for pleasure is a very indulgent act after all 
. I only expressed concern that you may be forcing yourself to write something you're uncomfortable with as a subject, then that kind of thing tends to give you writer's block. But if you have no qualms about it, then I certainly can't tell you otherwise 
... write on!
All creative decisions are yours at the end of the day, if my suggestions work or don't work for what you're trying to do the its perfectly fine
. I only expressed concern that you may be forcing yourself to write something you're uncomfortable with as a subject, then that kind of thing tends to give you writer's block. But if you have no qualms about it, then I certainly can't tell you otherwise ... write on!All creative decisions are yours at the end of the day, if my suggestions work or don't work for what you're trying to do the its perfectly fine
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?