08-07-2012, 06:02 AM
I think 'easily' instead of easy. I'd leave out 'bitch' - too common. I think it could live without the last two lines
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the simplicity of being - by Indie - 07-31-2012, 04:48 PM
RE: the simplicity of being - by billy - 07-31-2012, 06:04 PM
RE: the simplicity of being - by Indie - 08-01-2012, 05:34 PM
RE: the simplicity of being - by raymond trevitt - 08-07-2012, 06:02 AM
RE: the simplicity of being - by addy - 08-07-2012, 05:57 PM
RE: the simplicity of being - by Indie - 08-08-2012, 06:20 PM
RE: the simplicity of being - by addy - 08-08-2012, 08:29 PM
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