casting shadow (final? edit on 'your hands)
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casting shadow (final? edit on 'your hands)
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08-06-2012, 06:54 AM
Well, you won't like this much, but I revisited the original and found I liked it a lot better.I'm not quite sure why. Maybe the poem is just familiar now but also it feels a bit like some life has been sucked out of it, lost its innocence and vulnerability. Or I'm talking crap.
Before criticising a person, try walking a mile in their shoes. Then when you do criticise them, you're a mile away.....and you have their shoes.
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casting shadow (final? edit on 'your hands) - by Ruth - 08-06-2012, 03:04 AM
RE: casting shadow (final? edit on 'your hands) - by penguin - 08-06-2012, 06:54 AM
RE: casting shadow (final? edit on 'your hands) - by billy - 08-06-2012, 10:51 AM
RE: casting shadow (final? edit on 'your hands) - by Ruth - 08-07-2012, 05:42 AM
RE: casting shadow (final? edit on 'your hands) - by MrA - 09-22-2012, 06:31 PM
RE: casting shadow (final? edit on 'your hands) - by poetsorrow - 09-24-2012, 02:28 AM
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