Friable
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Two blistered sausages spilling
their stuffing over the sofa.
The yellow of an egg has run;
the sun is exiting the sky.
Burnt and brittle bacon, broken
by children full of beans.

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Two blistered sausages spilling
their stuffing over the sofa.
The yellow of an egg has run;
the sun has exited the sky.
Burnt bacon curled dark anger,
broken by children full of beans
Before criticising a person, try walking a mile in their shoes. Then when you do criticise them, you're a mile away.....and you have their shoes.
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Friable - by penguin - 08-02-2012, 09:25 PM
RE: Family Dinner - by Universalchild - 08-03-2012, 01:19 AM
RE: Family Dinner - by billy - 08-03-2012, 06:51 AM
RE: Family Dinner - by Philatone - 08-03-2012, 08:53 AM
RE: Family Dinner - by penguin - 08-04-2012, 06:36 AM
RE: Family Dinner - by addy - 08-04-2012, 08:49 AM
RE: Friable - by penguin - 08-05-2012, 07:57 AM
RE: Friable - by billy - 08-05-2012, 10:11 AM
RE: Friable - by Ruth - 08-06-2012, 03:28 AM
RE: Friable - by penguin - 08-06-2012, 06:34 AM
RE: Friable - by tectak - 08-07-2012, 04:03 PM
RE: Friable - by penguin - 08-07-2012, 05:12 PM
RE: Friable - by addy - 08-07-2012, 06:18 PM
RE: Friable - by tectak - 08-09-2012, 02:05 AM
RE: Friable - by penguin - 08-07-2012, 08:21 PM
RE: Friable - by billy - 08-09-2012, 11:14 AM
RE: Friable - by addy - 08-09-2012, 11:38 PM



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