The Sum Of Fractured Thoughts.

[Universalchild]

The sum of Fractured Thoughts.

Cracks criss-cross along the glass
All, everything, shatters. Nice imagery.

My reflection ground down from the pieces of myself as ceramic
- turns to dust early, Continued good imagery, I like the choice of ceramic.
Like nothing ever mattered

… As though I’m lying within the “criss-crossings”, Not so sure about this line, it sticks out for me.
In an existence my mind had always projected:
The white-washed walls of reality, breaking up in front of me;
As if somehow I’d never existed… Really good couple of lines here.

For I’ve untangled,
Unravelled
codes, such twists that of which decalcifies me from bone:
Broken like glass, or dinner plates. I dread the possibilities of my own deepest unknowns: Wow really liking this.

I am nothing more than the fractured sum of my idealism
Whilst being nothing less than its fragmented shell;
I become nothing but the sandstone portrayal of ‘myself’
Whilst feeling like everything but it, Not so fond of the repetition of whilst, but love "sandstone portrayal"
Somehow…

03:33am
15/02/2012.

I really enjoyed reading this, good strong imagery with a collected theme & deep thoughts.