At dawn of understanding

[billy]

Hi matt, forgive me if i get this arse about tit. i see the dawn of man getting language and art

At dawn of understanding

Writing at dawn of understanding. our first words.
Though early in mourning before
misty and brief,
desire in drawing out adorning relief cave painting needs a period at line end
Of spoken thoughts eagering anew stand the syntax feels a little off, would a new stand read better? missing a period
At raising wavy lengths hand in hand.
So the words of the night must star so vast,
The quarter a moon inflaming to rounding grief
That even understanding in time will disappear.

the last three lines feel slightly off;
i read it as: The quarter moon inflaming to a rounding grief
i'm not so sure about how the last two lines should be, but they feel a little off.

i often get these eureka moments and they're often wrong so feel free to spank me if it is. i think primarily i got the conception of my idea from the title.

thanks for the read.