your hands (version 2ish)
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because I did not lift my face,
I watched your hands, arms, your elbows, bent and resting lightly on your thighs,
and I watched the floor,
but mostly I watched your hands.

I saw the line that suggests a creative lover,
the one that shows a clever mind, imagination, and
the mound by your thumb that may indicate passion.

as we spoke, I saw meanings in their shapes, and
on the floor, I watched our shadows, made from street and candle light in a darkened room
flicker and entwine.

you stood, you smiled and then your arms embraced me,
and held on until I let go of you.

then I was on my way, casting my own shadows,
regarding my own hands.
“Give me silence, water, hope
Give me struggle, iron, volcanoes.”
― Pablo Neruda
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your hands (version 2ish) - by Ruth - 07-31-2012, 07:35 AM
RE: your hands (version 2ish) - by addy - 07-31-2012, 08:37 AM
RE: your hands (version 2ish) - by billy - 07-31-2012, 10:12 AM
RE: your hands (version 2ish) - by Ruth - 07-31-2012, 11:39 AM
RE: your hands (version 2ish) - by Leanne - 07-31-2012, 11:53 AM
RE: your hands (version 2ish) - by Ruth - 07-31-2012, 12:12 PM
RE: your hands (version 2ish) - by billy - 07-31-2012, 11:53 AM
RE: your hands (version 2ish) - by tectak - 08-01-2012, 12:04 AM
RE: your hands (version 2ish) - by Mattias Tahri J H - 08-01-2012, 04:47 PM
RE: your hands (version 2ish) - by Ruth - 08-02-2012, 04:58 AM



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