How Does Everybody Stop Having Sex?
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Thanks, guys. Yeah, it's primarily a "performance poem". Some of the refrain lines are rubbish, some are good. Originally, the refrain in each verse was the same as the title. Maybe that's better.
Before criticising a person, try walking a mile in their shoes. Then when you do criticise them, you're a mile away.....and you have their shoes.
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How Does Everybody Stop Having Sex? - by penguin - 07-29-2012, 06:01 PM
RE: How Does Everybody Stop Having Sex? - by penguin - 07-31-2012, 07:06 AM



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