07-31-2012, 07:06 AM
Thanks, guys. Yeah, it's primarily a "performance poem". Some of the refrain lines are rubbish, some are good. Originally, the refrain in each verse was the same as the title. Maybe that's better.
Before criticising a person, try walking a mile in their shoes. Then when you do criticise them, you're a mile away.....and you have their shoes.

