some of the lines on there own feel beautiful in their own right. Lines 2 and 6 to name only two.
sadly the beautiful lines don't hold the poem to together. while the artist know what his work represents it won't work unless he shares some his knowledge with the person viewing it. the same can be said for poetry etc. i get glimpses but never enough to see the picture.
sadly the beautiful lines don't hold the poem to together. while the artist know what his work represents it won't work unless he shares some his knowledge with the person viewing it. the same can be said for poetry etc. i get glimpses but never enough to see the picture.
