while we mind the hours
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under-scene fish sync
fours, fives, pi.
water-shawled depth-speak
unseen mind.

land-side offerings
palm-sized, scaled.
bracted potential
flight, wisp-air.

is-ness unfurling
clocks unheard
silent exchanges
oyster, pearl.

symmetry, motion,
mystery.
herring, cousin of
evergreen.

I wrote this recently to accompany a friend's photo, which we have submitted for consideration at an exhibit. Before I post it with the photo, I'd like to see how the poem holds up on its own. Fire away!

I wrote this recently to accompany a friend's photo, which we have submitted for consideration at an exhibit. Before I post it with the photo, I'd like to see how the poem holds up on its own. Fire away!
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while we mind the hours - by Tracey - 07-29-2012, 01:36 PM
RE: while we mind the hours - by billy - 07-29-2012, 03:48 PM
RE: while we mind the hours - by Leanne - 07-29-2012, 06:08 PM
RE: while we mind the hours - by addy - 07-29-2012, 06:28 PM
RE: while we mind the hours - by penguin - 07-29-2012, 07:08 PM
RE: while we mind the hours - by Todd - 07-30-2012, 07:46 PM



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