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important things
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07-29-2012, 10:36 AM
I'd love to hear this read aloud/spoken/recorded, to understand the inflections of voice better. Right now I find the repetition really jarring as well where you end some of your lines, they read very cut off, yet I understand the artistic structure of this and that jilted internal dialogue we all sometimes have.
"Poets are shameless with their experiences: they exploit them." - Friedrich Nietzsche
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important things - by Ruth - 07-29-2012, 09:35 AM
RE: important things - by billy - 07-29-2012, 10:09 AM
RE: important things - by Ruth - 07-29-2012, 10:24 AM
RE: important things - by Indie - 07-29-2012, 10:36 AM
RE: important things - by Ruth - 07-29-2012, 12:16 PM
RE: important things - by addy - 07-29-2012, 12:43 PM
RE: important things - by Todd - 07-29-2012, 12:47 PM
RE: important things - by Ruth - 07-30-2012, 05:26 AM
RE: important things - by abu nuwas - 07-30-2012, 07:04 AM
RE: important things - by Ruth - 07-31-2012, 06:21 AM
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