07-28-2012, 06:11 PM
(07-26-2012, 10:32 AM)Mark Wrote: One-hundred twenty-five dollars left toutter shite......not really
my name. Is worthless
all I'll ever be? Is doomed
my only option?
One hour, twenty minutes of
sleep. Is something I never get
going to kill me?
Twenty dollars per
day, after days of waiting,
isn't that much. Longer
nights get shorter
and shorter. Nights
can be longer.
the enjambment is excellent and it's a really well constructed poem,
that it's in the fun section just stops me from having to praise it any more
