07-28-2012, 06:08 PM
it reads really well to me so i haven't done a line by.
repair feels forced or just too obvious.
i think you have a great analogy (is that the word?) in the last two stanza.
nice snapshot of an icy wheel-change done in a hurry.
thanks for the read.
repair feels forced or just too obvious.
i think you have a great analogy (is that the word?) in the last two stanza.
nice snapshot of an icy wheel-change done in a hurry.
thanks for the read.
