No Regrets

[billy]

it has some good words in there but overall i think it's try to be too much, too poetic.
too profound.

some lines are almost excellent;
Imaginariums of nothing but shadows of hollows skeletons

but overdo the wordiness

Imaginariums of shadows and hollows skeletons

there are more sentences that if trimmed down would add a lot more than they are doing at present.