Freedom

[addy]

Interesting content. I must confess, I found the first stanza better than the second, as I found it fresh; commitment to freedom parallels a commitment to love, which isn't always euphorically happy and is in fact often hard (that's my take on it anyway)

Ring the bell so that the chimes fill the skies
I would even search you in the seas of diguise
I shall walk to the warmth of your gloomy smile
We will walk to the end of roads in this exile Wonky meter here

The birds flow with the freedom of love and hate "love and hate" is a cliche contradiction. Coupled with "freedom", there are too many cliche abstractions in this line.
Careless of their ends and melancholy fate
Breaking these torment chains and step in the blissful shoes bringing up shoes doesn't work for me, since the overarching metaphor in this stanza is about birds/wings/flying.
We will grown exuberant wings like them too Quite like the lift in this last line

Thanks for the read