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Humanised Lust
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07-26-2012, 08:20 AM
Can't say I care much for the title, but the poem itself is great. It's very clever in how it weaves itself in and out between blunt reality and oz-like fantasy. I imagine this may be jarringly funny to those who read it from a Dorothy POV
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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Humanised Lust - by heslopian - 07-23-2012, 01:11 PM
RE: Humanised Lust - by Aish - 07-23-2012, 02:37 PM
RE: Humanised Lust - by heslopian - 07-23-2012, 02:53 PM
RE: Humanised Lust - by Philatone - 07-25-2012, 11:17 AM
RE: Humanised Lust - by heslopian - 07-25-2012, 11:26 AM
RE: Humanised Lust - by billy - 07-25-2012, 11:30 AM
RE: Humanised Lust - by heslopian - 07-25-2012, 11:35 AM
RE: Humanised Lust - by penguin - 07-25-2012, 04:54 PM
RE: Humanised Lust - by heslopian - 07-25-2012, 09:32 PM
RE: Humanised Lust - by addy - 07-26-2012, 08:20 AM
RE: Humanised Lust - by heslopian - 07-26-2012, 10:51 AM
RE: Humanised Lust - by addy - 07-27-2012, 11:33 AM
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