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Humanised Lust
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07-25-2012, 09:32 PM
Thank you for your kind and honest feedback, penguin
 I don't think I intended L4 and 5 to be ironic, whereas I meant the whole poem to have an arch tone of voice.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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