07-25-2012, 04:30 PM
Hello Geoff. Well, you certainly go root and branch at your poems. Like an elephant clearing a forest.Glad to see matriarch back, such a nice word.Wouldn't she have eaten ancestors rather than daughters?
I struggle with the whole "more than life itself" business, don't get the point. But after that, from a path narrow onwards, I thought it was very well put.
Ray
I struggle with the whole "more than life itself" business, don't get the point. But after that, from a path narrow onwards, I thought it was very well put.
Ray
Before criticising a person, try walking a mile in their shoes. Then when you do criticise them, you're a mile away.....and you have their shoes.