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A Perfect Circle
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07-25-2012, 11:14 AM
the poem didn't really start for me until the third stanza or so. that being said, I think the tone and word choices are great, with a nice twist of humor added. I like the story and how you let it progress. for some images, I did kind of wonder why they had to be included...
Written only for you to consider.
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A Perfect Circle - by billy - 12-12-2009, 05:53 PM
RE: A Perfect Circle - by billy - 07-23-2012, 10:02 AM
RE: A Perfect Circle - by Leanne - 07-23-2012, 10:43 AM
RE: A Perfect Circle - by billy - 07-23-2012, 10:54 AM
RE: A Perfect Circle - by Universalchild - 07-23-2012, 10:02 PM
RE: A Perfect Circle - by billy - 07-24-2012, 05:09 PM
RE: A Perfect Circle - by Philatone - 07-25-2012, 11:14 AM
RE: A Perfect Circle - by billy - 07-26-2012, 04:42 PM
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