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Presenting -- audio
Leanne Offline
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#1
01-12-2012, 09:28 AM
Since I had the microphone out and promised to record this ages ago...

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Presenting
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#2
01-12-2012, 10:18 AM
Brilliant! Very spirited, and thanks. I liked it before just written. Emphasises once again that with some poems at least, to hear is so important.
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#3
01-12-2012, 10:23 AM
And chopping out that stanza from the original made it a damn sight easier to record! Big Grin
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#4
01-12-2012, 04:57 PM
It's even better read aloud. Smile The tone and inflections you used breathed life into it perfectly.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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#5
01-13-2012, 04:50 AM
Thanks addy, now you do one!
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#6
01-13-2012, 10:43 PM
my daughter just asked, "dad, WTF are you listening too" hehe

it was excellent. more so because your voice has a certain innocent quality, i'm sure the fact holds no water.

excellent. xx
yes addy please do an audio poem. you can do my ann sexton one if you wish Smile
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#7
01-16-2012, 03:25 PM
Cheers Billy... sorry to get you into trouble... not Smile

Addy, don't think we're going to let you get out of this.
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