Morning revelation or...

[ICSoria]

Last Call Last Night

I didn't notice when we met,
that your left leg is made of wood.
The bar was dark and I forget
how far you tilted when you stood.

You didn't see, nor did you know
that my right hand is made of steel.
Our drinks were tall, the lights were low,
and it was easier to conceal.

Sid
©2011

[billy]

would easy instead of easier help the meter?

what a surprise they both must of had.
a good original funny poem. other than the above nit i thought it excellent. jmo
thanks for the read.

[ICSoria]

Damned if you didn't pick out the very word on which I been dithering! I kept changing tense and debating which one worked better as far as syntax. I guess I was over-analyzing, as I am often prone to do.

Sid

[billy]

i'm the same with the exception that i churn out crap