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"Dictator."

"Dictator."
Ris Yerg Offline
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#1
06-14-2011, 04:32 PM
I live in your mind.
You sold your soul to devil.
And very cheaply.

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addy Offline
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#2
06-14-2011, 05:14 PM
That last line just made it for me... the benign almost-pleasantness of it made me it extra cringeworthy.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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