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Tumescent geyser
dripping pearls
Decorate
my skin
white
I
wont
flinch
Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts.
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(06-08-2011, 06:43 AM)violet Wrote: Tumescent geyser
driping pearls dripping
Decorate
my skin
white
I
wont
flinch
i should hope not
nice sperty poem.
thanks for the read violet
glad to see you're up and running
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Lovely, rich poem. The last words make me feel as if this poem is suspended in air, a snapshot in time.
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Thank you kindly
I corrected the error
Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts.
