"A leaf."

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"A leaf."

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#1

05-18-2011, 01:57 AM

Mischievous
Green and young
Out of a bush
Shoved me
Its tongue.

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Are you alluding to me?

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05-19-2011, 10:00 AM

a fresh way of looking at nature
i enjoyed it's mischief
thanks for the read.

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