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"Castration."

"Castration."
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#1
05-05-2011, 03:43 PM
A sharp ax "today"
Chops a yesterday illusion off
From a tomorrow dream.

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billy Offline
Are you alluding to me?
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05-05-2011, 03:58 PM
thankfully my axe is blunt
thanks for the insight
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05-05-2011, 05:31 PM
Thank you, Billy, for reading and witty comment!
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#4
05-06-2011, 05:13 PM
Only you could make castration sound like an Emily Dickinson poem. Great work Ris.
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#5
05-06-2011, 06:14 PM
Hi, Heslopian!
Thank you so much for your kind comment!
I, well, think that this was just a "poetry luck" that I "trapped".
Thank you once more!
R.Y.
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