"Dry leaves ..."

[Ris Yerg]

Dry leaves rustle under my feet.
Maybe Eternity hears the same
When leads its endless way
And treads, bare feet,
On my elapsed day.

[billy]

i found this to be a great
little poem ris. for such a small piece it speaks volumes.
in fact, the more i read it, the more i think its really really great .
thanks for the read.

[Verbavore]

Very Nice. I agree with billy. here here

[Ris Yerg]

Thank you, friends!
I appreciate your kind comments very much!
R.Y.