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"Evolution."

"Evolution."
Ris Yerg Offline
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#1
03-24-2011, 05:12 PM
My fangs are silver.
I like garlic and sun tan ...
Take it easy, amigo,
I am a vampire indigo.

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billy Offline
Are you alluding to me?
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#2
03-24-2011, 05:41 PM
i really like this,
makes me think of a Californian surfer
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#3
03-24-2011, 08:22 PM
Thank you, Billy!
R.Y.
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The Dog's Bollocks.
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03-25-2011, 05:17 PM (This post was last modified: 03-25-2011, 05:18 PM by addy.)
Ha! Great image. So vivid, I can almost picture it in as a scene in an especially clever novel
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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#5
03-25-2011, 06:13 PM
This is an amazing poem Ris. The final rhyme is simply divine. Michevious and clever.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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#6
03-25-2011, 06:26 PM
Thank you, friends!
Glad to know that you are got some fun with reading!
R.Y.
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