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good girls don't

good girls don't
billy Offline
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#1
03-16-2011, 06:49 PM
Good girls don't
take payment.
Good girls prefer to wait
till after the wedding
before spending your money.
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#2
03-17-2011, 01:57 AM
Very Bukowski Tongue Good one Billy.
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#3
03-18-2011, 04:42 PM
Yes, they are!
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03-22-2011, 05:17 PM
thanks guys, i never noticed the bukowski in it Sad
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