03-01-2011, 06:55 PM
If I have got nothing
Nothing at all
What wants this world.
Nothing at all
What wants this world.
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"Advice: It can go and ..."
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03-02-2011, 06:23 PM
I don't understand this poem and I like the fact that it doesn't try and force me to understand it. You remind me a lot of Emily Dickinson with your idiosyncratic syntax and ambiguous meanings.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
03-03-2011, 03:18 PM
Oh, no!
You break my heart! You don't understand this my brilliant piece ... and I remind you unknown for me woman ... and you scratch yourself. Yes!. As a samurai I'm going to commit seppuku ... What else? (Though, yes, I'm not a samurai, so pity!) Probably enough? Ha-ha! Heslopian, take it easy! PS. Thanks a lot for comments on my works! I really appreciate them! R.Y. |
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