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"Today."

"Today."
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#1
02-11-2011, 05:18 PM
I tore up
A paper' butterfly.
I don't like caterpillars.

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Are you alluding to me?
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#2
02-14-2011, 01:58 PM
intriguing
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addy Offline
The Dog's Bollocks.
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#3
02-14-2011, 05:39 PM
My only nit is the title, which I don't quite get LOL Tongue But otherwise, very nice. This one really cut me to the quick
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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#4
02-14-2011, 06:03 PM
Hi!
Thanks, friends!
Addy, about title ... Well, that day was for me "today", Ha-ha!
R.Y.
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