"Bad swimmer."
#1
In a pub he told
A fairy tale about himself
That never came true.
Probably the fairy tale
Sunk in a sea of beer ...


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#2
for me the poem was in the first three lines
thanks for the read ris.
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#3
Yes, the last two lines is a harsh reality ...
R.Y.
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#4
Wow, this packed a horrible punch to the gut Sad. Very lovely.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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#5
Thank you, Addy!
R.Y.
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#6
like the title hehe 5 stars!
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#7
Thank you, madA!
I like your avatar very much! Think I should have something like this! Ha-ha!
You welcome, Bro!
R.Y.
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#8
A bleakly funny poem, with an excellent final couplet. Thanks for the read, Ris.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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