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In a pub he told
A fairy tale about himself
That never came true.
Probably the fairy tale
Sunk in a sea of beer ...
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for me the poem was in the first three lines
thanks for the read ris.
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Yes, the last two lines is a harsh reality ...
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02-06-2011, 10:45 PM
(This post was last modified: 02-06-2011, 10:46 PM by addy.)
Wow, this packed a horrible punch to the gut

. Very lovely.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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like the title hehe 5 stars!
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Thank you, madA!
I like your avatar very much! Think I should have something like this! Ha-ha!
You welcome, Bro!
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A bleakly funny poem, with an excellent final couplet. Thanks for the read, Ris.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe