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		In a pub he told
A fairy tale about himself
That never came true.
Probably the fairy tale
Sunk in a sea of beer ...
	
	
	
	
		
	
 
 
	
	
	
		
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		for me the poem was in the first three lines
thanks for the read ris.
	
	
	
	
		
	
 
 
	
	
	
		
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		Yes, the last two lines is a harsh reality ...
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		02-06-2011, 10:45 PM 
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		Wow, this packed a horrible punch to the gut 

. Very lovely.
	
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
	
		
	
 
 
	
	
	
		
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		like the title hehe 5 stars!
	
	
	
	
		
	
 
 
	
	
	
		
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		Thank you, madA!
I like your avatar very much! Think I should have something like this! Ha-ha!
You welcome, Bro!
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		A bleakly funny poem, with an excellent final couplet. Thanks for the read, Ris.
	
	
	
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