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"Loneliness with rain."

"Loneliness with rain."
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#1
02-02-2011, 05:46 PM
I stand under rain.
Biped umbrellas
Pass by ...
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02-02-2011, 10:24 PM
This is a weirdly beautiful piece. I love it, mostly for its originality.
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Are you alluding to me?
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02-03-2011, 11:36 AM
some of the observations you make in these shorts poems are great.
this one is no different.
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#4
02-03-2011, 04:34 PM
Hi, friends!
Heslopian - I read your piece about "rain and popping umbrellas" and was impressed and amazed that the similar thoughts come to different people! I did write this piece about, well, 7 or 8 months ago. It seems thoughts fly somewhere? Ha-ha!
Thanks for kind comment! R.Y.
Billy - thanks a lot!
R.Y.
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