A Cinquain

[heslopian]

Loathing:
Fermented rage.
I study myself
like a shy coroner:
Piteous.

[billy]

Loathing:
Fermented rage.
I study myself
like a shy coroner:
Piteous.

the forms there jack though some would say use ;
2 syllables line
4 syllables line
6 syllables line
8 syllables line
2 syllables line

but the purist way is how you have it or the syll's.
so you have the form right which is good

after all that guff, i can say nice Cinquain, which says much more than it seems.

[heslopian]

Thank you for the kind words and feedback, Billy I thought all cinquains had to stick to that specific form!

[billy]

yeah it has a choice of word or syllables.

some neo-purist say it should just be the syllable count.