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Love Note
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#1
11-08-2010, 11:44 PM
I love you very much
even though we've never met
and if you were mine

we'd live in a house
where the back garden grass
is long and unkempt

so as to disguise
our love bunny games
in the sun.
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billy Offline
Are you alluding to me?
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#2
11-09-2010, 06:03 AM
hehe. my partner calls me bunny Blush
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11-09-2010, 06:48 AM
(11-09-2010, 06:03 AM)billy Wrote:  hehe. my partner calls me bunny Blush

SmileSmileSmile

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addy Offline
The Dog's Bollocks.
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#4
11-10-2010, 08:23 AM
That is adorable Smile
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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#5
11-10-2010, 12:24 PM
Thanks AddySmile
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