08-24-2010, 01:06 PM
A cup of coffee
Autumn is coming
Bitter memories
Autumn is coming
Bitter memories
- the partially blind semi bald eagle
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comment please
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08-24-2010, 01:13 PM
i like it sj. feels a little warm and a little sad.
in fact it feels complete. can't see as i'd try and change it. thanks for the read. 
08-24-2010, 02:33 PM
thanks bill,that's how i felt this morning having my coffee
08-25-2010, 04:53 PM
Great mood piece. And the image of earthy colors is so vivid. Good one
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
10-08-2010, 08:27 AM
Great piece, and perfect haiku. Short and simple and yet saying so much. Nothing I can say beyond that really.
01-30-2011, 12:27 AM
Hi!
Three lines in the best Japan' haiku stile! Enjoyed. R.Y. |
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