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Oh gosh
you ugly frog
are you the thing?
that I should kiss
and in so doing
claim my prize
of handsome prince
who lies within
no my ugly princess
you’re the thing
that kisses me
and in so doing
lets me claim my prize
of sexy froglette
ready for a jump
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ha! great poem, quite the twist, I like it. is there more meaning? symbolism of inner beauty is best?
men have lots of inner beauty I have discovered.
Like the exciting ending.
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sadly there's no inner meaning Bianca,
or maybe, if there is it's a subconscious one
thanks for the kind words
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oh boo hoo, it's all about jumping. ha ha
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(06-05-2010, 05:12 AM)Bianca Alabaster Wrote: oh boo hoo, it's all about jumping. ha ha
i suppose it's really about irony.....and jumping
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Haha! That's awesome! I like how the perspective was totally turned on its head
One of my favorites of yours
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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Aren't you a clever bastard? This has some of the best wit I've ever read in a poem. Wouldn't change it, really.
