Whale Fall - Edit 1

[Wjames]

Sculpin and mollusk devour
soft tissue, snot worms colonize bone,
urchins form a phalanx:
in my garden, spiderwort blooms.

Kilometers press carcass to clay.

Sculpin and mollusk devour soft tissue,
snot worms colonize bone,
urchins phalanx stingers.

In my garden, spiderwort blooms.

[RiverNotch]

L1 might be completely disposed of,
L2 might be broken in two,
L4 might receive a verb,
and L5 might be connected with a colon or em dash:

Sculpin and mollusk
devour soft tissue,
snot worms colonize bone,
urchins form a phalanx:
in my garden, spiderwort blooms.

[Wjames]

Thanks for reading & your thoughts, River, I made most of your suggestions, just moved devour up, I think it's a better line break.

I think it's cleaner now.