From Norway With Caraway (edit 3)

[wasellajam]

I miss the cookies, but it is part of what made me think this poem had multiple poems in it. Could you write a sister-poem about cookies? (That sentence sounds ridiculously twee, but in your hands it won’t be)

lol, working on an edit now, so far the cookies are back but with a strong edit trying to tie it in better.
We'll see how it plays, so appreciate your input.

[wasellajam]

So, new edit up, hoping the characters don't slide as much but I may be okay if they do, cut some minutia but added it elsewhere lol. Grateful for any and all crit.