.. and some sunshine

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Sending a shiver down my spine
A fenomen so divine
A promise that all will b fine

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When it's time to snip the vine
And drink to the love we all pine
You to yours and I to mine

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When it's time to snip the vine
And drink to the love we all pine
You to yours and I to mine

You just made this poem better

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Have you looked at any of the poetry practice exercises? They're great for controlling rhyme and flow,
I wanna see you write a sonnet. It is challenging, but classic and almost universal.

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Have you looked at any of the poetry practice exercises? They're great for controlling rhyme and flow,
I wanna see you write a sonnet.  It is challenging, but classic and almost universal.

could you be so kind and tell me where to find em, and i shall look it up!

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Here's a good one


There's also shakespearian sonnets and petrarchan sonnets and different kinds of meter to work with but just starting with a form as a practice exercise you can always make it harder later

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Thank u