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A lune to eight lanes
day to day living
in rush hours
breathing exhaustion
driving tire to tired
I've wondered
what thoughts they're lost in
through snarling traffic
steel driven
they do what they must
ashes to ashes
they press on
from metal to rust
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Love this poem. Very relatable and universal it reminds me of when I was a delivery driver, but it could relate to any commuter. Well done!!
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(03-06-2025, 03:32 AM)Mark A Becker Wrote: A lune to eight lanes
day to day living
in rush hours
breathing exhaustion
driving tire to tired
I've wondered
what thoughts they're lost in
through snarling traffic
steel driven
they do what they must
ashes to ashes
they press on
from metal to rust
I love this. I love poems that refer to the random little mundane aspects of life. Your little thoughtful poems like this are some of my favorites.
