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'60s housewife, ex model,
so self-importantly modest
you sound,
Miss admittedly Scorpio,
whose self was a belonging
like a Lady's Purse, 19-
60s, -- too intimate to
consider
owned.
Ditch is a rhyme a New
England
girl grows clearly into.
Carpentering a casket for
lust
as though to enjoy would be
to delight a safely lit
elevator, shared with one or any
stockholder's wife
character.
Touch is a prison of cells,
like me.
And miss the point.
Mr. Natural fancied the soles
in his shoes more
than a soul-
fish hung -- but the tendencies
of this human condition.
Et cetera is my Dream.
Freud called it hysteria;
I wanta die, today.
I didn't know you could be another.
I was going to piss on the flowers, then I
remembered flowers, like numbers, and was happy,
a little while
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this is the best of billy
This is, if he has one, his major poem.
He didn't like Bukowski, Plath or Sexton.
And then he did.
And this Sexton poem is what proves his skill.
heslopian taught billy Bukowski and Sexton.
Speakin of Some one runnin for Prez
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I bumped my own poem. But billy's poem got pumped in the process.
I'm looking for loopholes.
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The turns of phrase in the poem are wildly unexpected
Unanticipable
Achieves the effect. Nice poem
BUT
there’s always a BUT
It needs to make literal sense too. This one doesn’t.
Nothing beats that Ronny asshole poem
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Me?
Anne?
billy?
I spent the last 6 hours with my neighbor.
My cousin's wife is a 23 year old teacher who had sex with her 17 year old student.
I said that I myself would like to have sex with cousin's wife.
My neighbor threatened to kill me for six hours.
Yet here I am.
Anne Sexton sings her verse
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(03-05-2025, 09:27 AM)rowens Wrote: Me?
Anne?
billy?
I spent the last 6 hours with my neighbor.
My cousin's wife is a 23 year old teacher who had sex with her 17 year old student.
I said that I myself would like to have sex with cousin's wife.
My neighbor threatened to kill me for six hours.
Yet here I am.
Anne Sexton sings her verse
If the neighbour your cousin?
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No. He and me have this angry friendship. Every time we drink together, I push his buttons. Every time he comes up with a new topic that I'm not allowed to talk about. Interracial relationships, Adultery, and now Women having affairs with teenagers. I'm one of those people who think that a 17 year old boy is old enough to have an affair with an older women, yet find the reverse situation problematic. What's problematic about it is that if I say it's good, I'm a pervert, if I say it's wrong it's misogynist and a double standard. It didn't help that the radio kept playing songs like Don't Stand So Close to Me and Rocking the Cradle of Love, and that he is a very religious person and also condemns my ability to predict what song is coming on next.
As for my cousin's wife, she is one of those so-called Borderlline Personality types. Time for some Madonna and more Anne Sexton.